Voted For: Mad Knight
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The argument to split a true love ends in embracement...
Given to the will to endure, hatred...no trace of it...
that was youre best line in my opinion you should work on emotino more and ya flow seemd to go on n off didnt feel thisv much you can do betta than this i know u can you had basic shit here mostly
Mad-all good good emoition good flow not ya best but its still nice you done well is thias ya first topuical??the beggining was deep good work keep up
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