Voted For: Tekneek
Tekneek: The first bar was ur best, the second and third bars were weak. Poor concepts worded really badly. Flow was alright, structure was fine, just try and come up with better concepts and improve your wording.
YouKay: You had some nice wordplay in there, I liked your third bar best even though it was very stretched, so try and get the lines closer together, no personals on him though which was bad, but overall definitely the better verse.
v/ YouKay
Would you mind dropping a vote on my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973