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Old 09-01-05, 10:16 AM   #12
KempoMRK
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Ah shit, I cut off the first part of my breakdown by accident.

Mike McGuire: Had some nice wordplay, structure was a bit stretched, flow was ok. First bar was pretty decent, I only got it after the explanation though, second bar not bad but really played, third bar was a bit weak, and fourth bar was the best of the battle, I liked it.
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