Voted For: Deranged

Deranged: Well, you won with the first bar as it was quite complex and a good homonym. Structure was pretty good, flow was alright, some good wordplay and punches were pretty decent but concepts wheren't anything special.

Pizawned: This was a real typical newb verse, the rhymes were forced, I guess you had a multi or two in there which was good, the punches were really weak and made no sense. Overall a poor verse, but you had multi's which upped it.

Still, easy win for Deranged.

v/ Deranged

Would you both drop a vote in my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973