Iitee listenin:

beat is dope as hell...the lyrics of the hook is good, but youre flowing it all wrong i think, u need more confident, u need to compress ure songs, ure either too high or too low, you cant hear ure voice too much but of what you can hear u have gd lyrics but tht is jus one part of audio, im not likin the hook atall....youre kinda swallowing the mic itll hurt the ears...

ok the next do, a lil better quality, ok maybe not, hes flow is much better, delivery better, but scottish accents mite be hard to understand so i dnt get much on what u say, did u say nigga?....im jus wonderin i heard summn...neways i doubt you did..not feelin the quality..throws it all of...

overall 5.5/10 keep it up, get a better mic and itll be kool

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