Voted For: Vaskez

The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another
Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter

Wordplay was alright here actually, not a good punch though

Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline
N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline

Stretched and I didn't like it

u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting*
vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em

Not bad, bit of a played concept though

vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin'
Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it

Not bad, best line of your verse


Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack
You gettin turned into a pin...
................................is the only time you successfully a-tack

Yeah I liked this, nice wordplay, you should take the ...'s out though, cos they make it seem stretched

I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics
But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it

Not bad, decent homonym

My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse
N' it might seem like good in-tent...
.............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house"

Pretty nice, original concept and worded well, same about the ...'s though

Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin'
Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon

Decent again, good closer

Vaskez got this pretty easily, was better in every category and had nice concepts and punches.

v/ Vaskez

Fraud, could you drop a vote in my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206973