^People above this dude are just negative...
lets break this down...

This is Concept is good ...i see what your tryin and it worked...i dont know what their talkin bout no flow, the structure and line length did kind of mess with the flow a bit..but still the flow was there at times...that was til the end..the last 4 lines could have been bangers..if they were worded the right way...but the way you have em the end didnt rhyme that well...the emotion was there..

I dont get why people say it was shit..i mean it was good ..a lil below avg. but still it was pretty good..
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Faith in Christ first diminished and now it is finally dispursed
when soldiers of God did not come down from heaven to end this curse
Every one has headaches in their head, like hangovers from hennessy
The power of religion has broken when Lucifer destroyed the Trinity

^ that was like...damn...thats kind of deep and makes you think...overall rating
5.3/10