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Old 09-01-05, 12:26 PM   #12
Young Kidd (LM)
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Int. - Flow was off at times...but the content was straight...nothing really WOW or thought prevokin..but still a nice verse...like someone said up there..it seemed like you were in a rush which hurt your flow drastically because you got offbeat at times..thast the only thing that really needs to be worked on..

The Q. - Pretty good flow, content was straight just as INT but yours had a little more bang to it..which made you slightly outshine dude..but together you two did good..overall its an average to slightly above avg piece...i like it tho...keep up..and do what you do...
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