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Old 09-01-05, 06:01 PM   #15
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Voted For: Mad Knight

Jeeeeeeeeeeesus Fucking Christ Your Lines Are To Long
... Lol My God, Thats Rediculous.

Ok, So This Is What Happend,

Fraud, Surprisingly Did VERY Well
... I've Really Gotta Comend You Man, Good Job.
Specially For A New Kid.

While Knight Completely Abused His Sturcture To Get It
... His Verse Was Filled With Detailed Metaphors And Poetics

But, If Fraud Simply Created More Of A Story He Could Have Won This.
Fraud Lack The Concept And Storyline That Involves A Reader That Knight Clearly Had.

So, Pretty Good Battle.
Both Need Some Work But Not Bad At All.