This is summin new that is bein writtin
its like a new knife thas jus been glistened
not even lookin at tha blade, cuz the suns rays reflect
off this new piece that has neva been neglected
i b walkin round tha bball court, seein ppl i kno i be gettin daps of respect
and since imma be leavin home 2 tha states im feelin a seensation of regret
and later in my life when im done wit college, imma go back to tha place i'll neva forget
im walkin along tha road, wit a couple of friends, hitchin into town
down here, in this parta the USVI No need for violence, nada sigle round sounded
man, it sucks when parents n kids yell and tha kids bein grounded
cuz not bein able 2 go out is like bein trapped inna cage, which i've founded
truly hard 2 be in, not bein able 2 go out n experience
but o well looks like tha jus how it is
aiight, yeah that deffinately loox better, thx.
KriZ