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Old 09-02-05, 12:13 PM   #8
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

CHIPS BREAKDOWN:

tryn'a get this battle goin, 3rd time iz the charm,
u shoulda ducked, it woulda saved u from me twistin your arm,
um, nah wtf was that?? (0/10)
and hurtin your feelins and bruisin your pride,
by the time i'm finished wit u, u'll wish u had died,
blah (2/10)
your whole fam iz weak, and y'all flowz iz whack,
how bout the 3 battles y'all didn't accept, remember that,
no no no (1/10)
now u battlin the hottest, sick wit the 'fiya', it's no surprise,
lady's nice but i'm not so i'll dick her in the eye lyrically,
didnt rhyme (0/10)
u ain't hearin me so i'll jump on your chest,
and c-walk wit no rhythm cuz i'm 'SO, SO DEF'
blah self glorification (1/10)
and 'GOOD', yo i come wit the RAWKUS,
empty the stash pull fast and i smash on u fuckaz.
horrible finisher...(1/10)

i aint even addin it up lol u already know its low as fuck, but ya punches (only one) wasnt strong at all, ya personals were blah and ya whole flow was fucked up especially in da middle...nothin rhymed well


MARVJAYS BREAKDOWN:

dis kid is a fag...i dare u 2 talk shit while im grippin da mag.
nah i aint "workin at a lay's factory" but ima put "chip in a bag".
kinda weak but nice nameplay (5/10)
rap skill you missin it badd...who u killin with ya borin raps????.
you a ex hooker dat use "bend ova 4 bucs" like "warren sapp".
lmaoooo good humor (7/10)
ya bar's suck n ya flows missin,fam u'll neva go gold spittin.
u hand out ya cd 2 dj's but like "hard headed kids" they "dont listen".
played coulda worded it betta (5/10
ya mother gon be my next freak,quit it nigga ya text week!...
dis like when "j.kidd & vince fight" all he want is "NET beef".
nice (7/10)
dont say ya ass is bout it..you should be da last da shout it..
only time dj's a "play ya record" is when they talkin badd out it
did u mean bad mouth it?? if so....(7/10)
u dont even have a record but me im da 1 many-envy-spittin
be4 you came 2 RV da "site was good" like "20/20 vision".......
aha nice close (6/10)

you had much more punches, few played lines that coulda been worded betta but ya shit was really a battle verse unlike chips shit

multz marv
punches marv
flow marv
personals marv
structure marv
humor marv

OVERALL - MarvJay1009


ez win....rtf links in sig
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