Voted For: Dopey

BATMAN
you wanna battle already your less than a newbie son
you dont even have a post and u wanna battle a mini pun
^self glor. no diss. 0/10^
when i start to blaze the last thing i need is gas
cuz im already on fire so u better run fast
^No diss in this just blabbering about ur self 0/10^
my skillz are as high as snoop smokin that weed
im the rymin monster,and your the next "emcee that i eat
^first decent punch though nothing special 4/10^
fuckin wit me and u must be on dope
when u accept this challenge you've lost all hope
^bad closer, no diss once again self glor. 0/10^
OVERALL:ur verse was plain...filled with self glor and lacked hard personals and punches...gutta work on those still..though ive seen improvement in ur verse....still lacked punches....flow was simple and plain

DOPEY

Get ur mind right this is rap, man, not the place for a superhero
Just sit here and watch, Batman, as I burn ya shit up like Nero
^OK opener nothing special self glor. 3/10^
I’m couldn’t be hit with more “wacks” if I was doing “karate”, ho
White boys never sounded so good, that’s cause u don’t do audio
^Stretched line forced words...good wordplay...5/10^
Thinkin ur Eminem, bitch, but in reality, u don’t want no drama
U bomb on bitches who think they can rap, makes u a suicide bomba
^iight closer, coulda been better....punch was ok 4/10^
OVERALL:ur verse was simple yet filled with a little wordplay and punches....personals were there and a little effective....overall you took this for more punches and better wordplay

V/dopey

rtf on the battle in my sig within 3 days or this vote will be dq'd

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