iite.....comeback u jus started lmao....quality is much better glad to see ure takin my tips....flow is pretty good, however youre voice is mushy it seems forced so it seems theres spit swirling in ure mouth and its hard to rap, before you rap its good to have soup or coffee, then drink water...ure voice seemd so forced jus act yo self i think and make sure ure mouth is clean and spit free

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