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Old 09-02-05, 04:32 PM   #22
KempoMRK
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This was feedback posted for Reflekt

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Just wanna see the polls, I wrote out a vote before I realised it was 200 posts minimum. Might as well post it though:

Facin' Kon...Better Prey Famz...'Cause like Kidd My Lines Stay On Point..
Family? u aint got none....ur funeral Ima be wit ur mom, Smokin a joint..

Filler, and a forced rhyme at the end

Im merkin this fag..Let the Hollow burst through his leg...Sit down Son..
Wen i lerk thru ya bag...i see purses and thangs..Homo? we found one..

Another forced rhyme at the end, weak punch and concept as well

Smash this kid vocally....so this fag can really Carry Mikes on his back..
Dont mistake me..If i see u at cha show...i guarantee u gettin clapped..

Filler again

You aint hard Mayn...let your guard down...and BLLAT.......its finished..
Cuz my heat stays hot............make your grave your personal kitchen..

More filler, didn't hit hard and weak concept

but i aint tryna end it Nice......i show mercy on the weak..........speak..
And ill leave ya like the doctor in saw............Have 'em missin his feet..

Weird concept, I still can't work out what doctor in saw means


Reflekt will take it to your city..and leave lumps on you like a camel son
And I'm not from "Detroit" but still I could "Rip Hamilton"*

Alright, but his name ain't Hamilton

Judging by the looks of things..We'd have to say Tha Q is your hero
Who else would take half naked pictures with 2 guys in front of mirrors?**

Hero-Mirrors was a weird rhyme, but thats a good personal

Your rhymes worst than 50 Cent..so I'm saying youre worth a quarter
Cause the only time you're the best to come out of Canada..is when I throw you over the border

Nah, weak and stretched

You get no love from RV..it's a fact Amerikaz Nightmare is not the best dawg
Yeah you live in dreams..but that's only when your songs are slept on

Reasonable concept, bit weakly worded

Finally i'll flip your name in reverse..but be still cause there more
I'll take the .nok out so you can Drop To The Floor***

Meh, personal was there but it didn't make much sense to me


Well, I'm reading Kon's battle record in his sig and how he's Middleweight champ and stuff, and I can only assume that he really didn't try. Cos I didn't like one line of his whole verse. Reflekt won it with his mirrors personal, and even that rhyme was off. So not good from either, but Reflekt took it cos he had punches.

v/ Reflekt

Could you both vote on my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973
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