Voted For: InfiniteStan

ayo.....dis kids a clown man
first of all who comes up with a name like infinite stan..??

Terrible, no concept or punch there at all

imma have ta merk dis nigga
must be a dumb kid...cuz he dont even no how 2 werk dis trigga

Nah, weak and played

but ay! imma show u a lesson or two....
dis fagget has been rejected by evry single crew..

If thats a personal best line of your battle so far, but it was worded really basically and still wasn't even good

the words coming outta your mouth is probally who the fuck is dee??
but still ur rhymes are as weak as da dude jorge from scary movie 3

I dunno Jorge, but the concept was better here

ayo kid you aint wanted around
so imma spin you around in circles like a merry-go-round...

Nah, weak and played


only a true genius wud know that battlin me aint smart
u only got 13 posts n' dat aint enough to climb my chart

Weak, bad concept

now u gotta get rid of dat picture of u lookin all retarded
i should smack u in da head n' teach u a lesson like coach carter

Concept was there, wording wasn't

ur 'bout to be extinct from this world in 'bout a second
now u got me started so im now bustin a tekken*

Concept was there again, but the wording was well off

you need to get an antivirus from infecting your self
uve been wackin it so much u betta' scream for sum help

Eh? This was weird

ur weak punches n' throws are missing n' only hittin air
but im graspin and breakin you as if i were a grizzly bear

[B]Concept was a bit unoriginal, and didn't really hit.


Tha Notorious D had nothing, just a typical newb verse, keep writing, read tutorials and then you'll elevate. Infinitestan at least punched, but none really stood out to me.

Still, v/infinitestan

Both drop a vote on my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973