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Old 09-02-05, 04:48 PM   #6
KempoMRK
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Voted For: vagita4

u always missin the point, like shaq shootin free-throws
droping shit on a thread, we label it “free-posts”

This was weak, no concept or punch there, just stated stuff

fuck rambuling ya name, u gambuling ya fame
N like that drug cermerical bullets i'll scramble-ya-brain

Nice multi's, but the wording was terrible in the second line and no real punch

LOOK,
we aint the same N u cant stop-me-infact
the rocky of RAP, that'll spit N still give ya STOCK'IN-A-CAP... BANG!!!!

Creativity was decent, but without the explanation I wouldn't have realised, try and word it so a reader would get it straight away


For Rap's Sake...Ya Fillers Are Like Boobs..They Ben Fake...
Real Thug? Only Burners He Carries r 1'z i use 2 Copy My Mix Tape

Weak, if you'd have changed the I to he it would have been better

Dat was jus a warm-up, time 2 show dis kid how i spit so well
Vagita huh? i'll Clip his Tale like unsportmen-like conduct in da NFL

Concept wasn't good and neither was wording

Caught dat punk..get Buu'd slicin u apart..so why bother wit chunks
Wear Out ur genes like fashions. when i son da father of Trunks

This was alright actually, good wordplay with genes father, but not worded very well

Quite close really, it was vagita's multi's vs psycho's closer...I think vagita took it cos psycho's closer didn't make all that much sense aside from the wordplay.

V/ vagita

Both drop a vote on my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973
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