Voted For: PhreeNapdizzle
u couldnt fool this crowd, with a personal line,
i'll whip away ur pride, like a homoside crime,
Setup was ok, but punch was poor
u got no proof on this aussie mc, i dont no why ur coming against me,
we drop lyrics that kill, fucked up lyricists, like this bitch,
Filler
watch as this, alterment bomb takes pinches, and merks this hypokrit,
i'll stomp on ur skull with no hesetation,
make ur ass dull, and whipe out ur family's comunication.
Nah, dunno what the first line was about but second and third wheren't good either
step up another contestent, aussie imp thats zinc has just crushed PhreeNapdizzle's intendents,
watch as this bitch drops his verse, iv just crushed him now im setting his curse,
iv got no match against you, and ur nothing but dirt, show me ur skillz cause they wont hurt,
I'll take this as grouped together, but you should stop doing that where one line just seems totally random. But none of the lines were good at all
ill take ur hit and walk away, u take mine like shit be left cryin 4 days...
Weak, didn't hit at all, and had no real setup cos it was a single line
Lets all ride the fagget trail with AITZ as the conductor..
so he can tell a tragic tail a race to be sucker/
Setup was alright, second line was weak
you dumped to a low'a level, battlin 'gainst a newbie
now ill go show the devil just how ta get down n groovie/
The setup showed potential, but the punch was just a forced rhyme
youve chased me around to prove me, how ur lyrics could soothe me,
you roam in the towns without a crown and never moved me/
Filler
Ill give you some props tho, your records do show some wins
you barely even drop flows.. but suck dick to gather pins/
Poor bar
Go easy on me wont you?.. this is my first battle
put ya hand back down, dont you go n run off n tattle/
Setup was promising again, but punch was poor
I can suprise the guys that realize that they lines are just lies..
when i come back n tell the truth when rhymes aligned bust and fly/
Filler
See, I wont keep the jaws flappen bout killin you it wont happen..
that aint rappin.. all that bullshit actually makes me start laughin/
Nice inners, dunno why, but this line was alright
Please stop sweatin urself.. gobble'n like a hen
cuz the last i checked ur profile, your record was 3 and 10.
The setup was absolutely terrible, with a good setup this could have been punch of the battle as the personal was good, but as it was it was just so so
Phree had better creativity, flow and punches, yet this battle was reasonably close, Phree was just better.
v/Phree
Both drop a vote on my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973