I liked the beat...

about your flow...ur flow will be on point for a few bars...then, it'd seem like you lost site of the beat...that's partially breath control, but the rest is simply writing lyrics that fit the beat...Listen to the flow, if it seems like you're off beat, re-write or re-spit a line


Lyrics: pretty decent in spots


This was a good attempt...u got heart dawg


But, I agree that this wasn't your best. I think the Dabatos track was your best.


good try though...keep elevating


ur making progress


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