Voted For: KempoMRK

KempoMRK

I'll post real fast cos it doesn't take long to rip ya,
Leaving your 'camp' mind 'concentrated' as if I'm 'Adolf Hitler',
^nice wordplay in second line, first is bleh 6/10

You joined before me and I'm still a hundred times as dope,
You could easily pass for an 'atheist'...'God's' giving you no 'hope',
^lmao @ second line, giggled at that, first is ok 7/10

I'll merk you like my name suggests yet I'm missing an E,
Damn, I could be missing a brain and you'd still struggle against me,
^haha, nice going against yourself but turning it into punch 8/10

Ha dude, i've noticed that you like posting pitiful drops
Shame, cos 'Nas' is the only one who gives 'One Mic' props.
^good nameplay, aight punch 6/10

Total: 27/40 = 67,5%, work bit more on creativity maybe and better first lines, better built-ups to make punch hit harder


one mic

C’mon man, kempo, you and I both know you aint hot/
Wots up wit your sig??, cuz there’s sumthin that luks similar to a cock/
^don't get the last line, first one is bleh...3/10

You think that’s kool??? Well I don’t, but gud for you/
Your flow’s tacky like ringtone adverts on channel U*/
^nice wordplay in second line, wasnt feeling first 6/10

You aint creative, you bore me like playin scrabble/
Wanna elevate, but your posts are mainly bad votes in battles/
^nah at first line, good punch with personal touch in second 6/10

Why we even battlin, im out of your range for certain/
You dope?? How???, wen you got beat by a nameless person!!
^nice shit 7/10

Total: 22/40 = 55%, work on more hardhitting punches with personal touch and complexity aight...

RTF on link in sig (against chip)...thanks...

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