well i love this version wit bow wow, anywho, i think your vocals need to be upped a lot cuz like i got my headphones turned all the way up and i cant even hear you, your flow needs mad work, it seems like you kinda wrote to some other beat, and you forced shit man, emotion needs a lot more work, quality needs a lot of work as well, and the way you tried to match the hook and shit was bad man, you could made that work better. anyway keep elevatin man.

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