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Old 09-03-05, 12:49 AM   #23
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shit was aight fam...ya flow seemed a lil off at times and omarion's hook was mixed just a lil off beat...ya lyrics were decent...only thing that held it back from being better was u were trying to fit to many words into some of ya bars and o's hook being outta place...keep working at it though fam...rtf on "Tell Me"
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