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weerd
nice flow
your delivery needs a bit of work though
i think you shouldve stressed your rhymes more though
it seems that you like cut straight into the next line, kinda like you cramming two and two together...
i guess it might effect your flow a bit, but in the long run i think itd sound a bit better...
lyrics is nice though
overall good stuff, was feeling it
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