I had a long vote drawn out, pressed "Post Vote" and I need 200 posts. I don't have Chip's feedback but I had Drama Queen's in a notepad document so here it is:

Drama Queen: You're structure was absolutely perfect, every line was the same length so subsequently it flowed well. It also flowed well due to a lot of inners. Good similes and metaphors and was consistently a good piece. I especially liked: When every human eye had his or her share of deadly visions.

Vote for Drama Queen if I could.