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Old 09-03-05, 09:11 AM   #16
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Voted For: Mad Knight

okay lets see.............

mk:
ur verse was dope, u got nice structure,and flow was nice, lot of motions in there....imagenary was great,
u got nice vocab,nice concepts and all was on ppoint...
i really liked ur peice...
ur elevated with ur topicals...gd job

fraud:
verse was ok....but u didnt get motions to it...except some barz...ur imagenary was ok..but u should use bigger vocab.......flow was ok...still could be better...
like i said...u should use bigger imagenary with ur lines...but not bad...............

still pretty easy battle....Vote for :MAD KNIGHT
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