Voted For: Deranged
aight you get my vote becuase your shit was more complex
MIKE, you where on a bosic level its almost time you elevate and start beating these guys, your good but just work on your metaphores and similies and making new creative shit up, what you can also do is start using better personals and making them hit real hard. other than that you already understand the consepts of everything and will be real good soon enough
DE: you had a better verse becuase you used better punches with nice personals also you had multies wich i personally like exspecially dope ones, LOL so you get my vote
RTF PLEASE
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