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Old 09-03-05, 02:17 PM   #9
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Voted For: Daemon

During preschool, he scribbled with a crayon when we was supposed to have red...
His name shows he's on the "X"... must be why he thinks he's chased by "feds".
5....decent
Seriously though, man, just plug it, like with most bitches do with the Red Zone...
R stole third plate while hunted by cops, just because he thought next he'd go home.
4...ain't feelin this much...but..meh..ite
Think you're a thug? Kid's like a box of duds, all he does is light up fucking doobies...
We wouldn't believe you were stoned...if you were a motherfucking mine of rubies.
6...liked the 2nd line..but not the 1st
Your eyes are really the red zone...you think you're cool because you smoke weed?
But I guess it really makes you a lot dumber...
because you think cheerios are donut seeds!
3......bad closer

once again, compeititon gotta a niggaz pussy wet...
oh no DAEMON!, ain't you tha faggot from Friday After Next...
3....NO...bad punch...
AK's hit tha flo', let tha crowd see you dance like puffy...
you an off brand nigga, soft patch pussy like ya dog Fluffy...
3....hated the set-up n punch was weak
I'm convinced that (D)icks (A)lways (E)xcercise in ya (M)outh...
(O)bviously lil (N)iggaz like you scared ta peak outside ya house...
7....good....keep flow n shit goin while still spellin his name..
before I leave, in conclusion I'm wishin you good luck fool...
but then tha G comes out wit a betta ending like nigga FUCK YOU...
3....no

Daemon got this battle.

Redzone...aside from that bar where you spelled out his name..the rest was whack.That 1st bar....just a horrible concept.Daemon..fagoot from FridayAfterNext?C'mon.And that 2nd bar...set-up talkin about guns n shit..and a weak punch.Last bar was basic and weak.

Vote-Daemon.
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