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Old 09-03-05, 06:09 PM   #11
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Voted For: evil

BUSSA FLOWS BREAKDOWN:
thinkin you hot shit ill show you to drop shit
you couldnt push weight standin in a mosh pit
4/10 kinda lame
claimin that you evil you probabely on that goth tip
black mascara on listenin to rock bitch
3/10 soft hit
for problems i got clips the problems you not this
im a problem when i spit thats it im done havin fun
0/10 didnt rhyme and no direct hit
son gotta grab my gun run when you hear that thang
bang than ya brains hang like a chain i stay the same
3/10 noooope
neva change just remain you lame n cant hang
ill mangle ya frame leave you no stranger to pain
3/10 u tried
you could drop like rain get lit up like thunder
ya fuckin wit numba 1 like mcgradys number
1/10 thats played and coulda been said betta

YA FLOW: not that good
YA STRUCTURE: way off
YA PUNCHES: very weak
YA WORDPLAY: ...................
YA MULTIZ: none
YA GRAMMER: mediocre
YA PERSONALS: blah


ILL_NOISE BREAKDOWN:
yo! this noob think he hot but really he cold as snow*
he can't rap if his life depened on bussa flow*
4/10 that was iight
im writing a quick key so i can beat thee
you aint a real emcee just a kid who seen 8mile on tv
3/10 ...........
this is gonna be a easy win so ill sit back and smile**
i hope you don't come wack just like yuor freestyle**
4/10 jea this is a easy win lol
haha im the big bad bully gonna take your lunches
your the oppisite of mike tyson you can't thrwo punches
5/10 best line so far
your done i kill all you wack guys
cause you couldnt bless the mic if you were baptized
6/10 i take that back, this was da best line

YA FLOW: on point
YA STRUCTURE: not that good
YA PUNCHES: 50/50
YA WORDPLAY: had nice wordplay
YA MULTIZ: none
YA GRAMMER: jus iight
YA PERSONALS: on point


OVERALL: ILL_Noise


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