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Old 09-04-05, 06:53 AM   #8
InfiniteStan
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Voted For: Premanition

v/premanition...your structure was okay but your punches were weak.. u need to elevate on your punchlines and you gott make your verses alot more personal...

batman...you need to have your structured fixed and keep the lines the same..your personals didnt really make sense..its good that you explained but u gott elevate on it...

...you got eminem on your signatures..hes great , dont make him look bad by throwing weak punches...
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