Voted For: Premanition

hahaha man i gotta give this shit to PREM MAN jusy way more personals

its self explanitoy but i have too explain here it is


PREM: his structure didnt drag
"In the shadow of the spider……...since that first kiss kid
Bats are blind, so you deciding which punch to miss with"
^^ nice opener str8 personal
So you super? A hero? With a record pro-found ZERO
you speechless cos Im burnin ya sound like program nero
Lazy bitch, you a metaphoric vegetable ~ a couch potato
^^nothin spectacular but still was a direct hit wit personal.
"but in the team of white cats you don’t even make the bench
shadowed like torch in tents, less head than tails on pence
forget key to your success beta acquire a spanner & wrench
beat me with your eyes closed, no you on ya back
changed that damn structure but you still plain wack"
^^^ loved the endin man WERD nice flow to it with structure and vocab with persoanls man!!!!!hit em hard with a haymaker conclusion!!!

VS.

BATMAN:
"oh shit im gittin into it so u better run
they'll be feedin u threw a tube wen im done"
^^this opener was i kinda weak man WERD and fix that structure man...no hate though like ur creativity.

"your as gay as john cena wearin that chain wit the lock*
maybe tha UK wouldnt be so embarassed if u wouldnt suck so much cock**
^^this was one out of two of ur good punches and personals man...liked ur creativity again man but again work on that structure...

"yo why did u have to come and battle me
maybe cuz u a vet who cant beat anyone but a newbie"
^^^liked this finisher man nice wordplay and personal punch......

but overall

punches,personal: PREM
creativity: BATMAN

V/PREM!!!

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