iight playa.......... okay piece, but looks more like a song than a freestyle......... topic was hoe niggaz, but most of your verses was self-glorification....... nice structure and okay flow, but you should up your vocab (but i guess it isn't too bad if this iz really a freestyle)....... okay i guess........ overall 7/10....... it was funny, but u should try harder to stay on topic if u have one....... keep it comin playa

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

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