nice verse, lol

flowed real well,
life's more than 16 bars and a few good lines,
your peronality ain't what u say but what's on your mind,
^^^thats a gr8 bar!

nice 1, keep em coming.

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!