I already told you what I thought about the first version of this track..

I'm loving the lyrics, not too complex, and the type of beat this is goes with your delivery nice... You fixed your flow in this version, it really does sound better, i hear a few dubs and they sound nice .. You toned down the emotion to match the feeling in the song. Your quality is better too.. I'm really feeling this version. Glad to see you took some of my advice in an effective way. Make me wanna peep every song you record. Keep elevating, you one of my favorite emcees on here.

Holla back.
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