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Old 09-04-05, 08:09 PM   #13
Sean Gunner
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Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Daubs
You wouldnt be Kon.Tay.Juz...if you were taken ill with chicken-pox..
And your punches are packed with pussy....like watchin a kitten box..
Set up isn't too creative, the punch is ok.
The DieNasty? thats so bad...infact i doubt i ever saw a gayer crew..
I even placed a notepad over bens eyes...Jus to give him paper view!!
Wordplay is blah, and the punch isn't that good.
Your american man,..you would still be fat, even by steadily eating..
And why do i need to hand you the loss..when your IPs already bleetin!!*
Wordplay is eh, punch concept isn't too creative, and set up is bad.

Overall, you had some good concepts, but your wording needs to be improved.

Kon.Tay.Juz

Daubs Stays on my dick...Fuck textin'..this niggaz spittin "Key Sex"..
Ya names similar to your Bars.....after the 3rd letter, Ya Shits BS..
Ok concept. Set up is bad though.
This Niggas Really E-thuggin..I mean..his brain must be off it's ringer..
Cuz Wen It Comes to Rv Beef..this Fag signs on with a magnum on his finger..
Lol, nice punchline.
Stop Son...Your fuckin wack...........Daubs is a fuckin' losin' junky..
All he does is battle herbs...that's why i saw him in the Bush with them Monkeys..
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Overall, work on your set ups.

My vote goes Kon for a good punch. Daubs had more, but quality > quantity. No hate Daubs. I still love you.

v- Kon
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