Voted For: Mike McGuire
your verses & rhymes are droppin easily like a feather
imma write you a note on helpin ur lyrics wich will make u a little better
runnin this cat over until his guts come out and spill
if he survives the attack then im comingout for shoot2 kill
closing the walls on ur ass until u cant breathe & speak
mean while i got chur mom bending down on her right knee
you need to put 911 on speedial for a a quick use
to bounce of the walls when im coming after you
you should of saved your credits on rapverse
now all the rappers are coming & snatching ur purse
im leaving and closing this case once and for all
leave this game to the pros and go back to playing T-ball
Infinite Stan- u tried 2 hard n tried ta act gangsta wit yo rhymes. u didnt use n e punches at all. try ta use mo personals n punches. Yo structure wuz iight i cud read it.
Overall ya verse was pretty weak n needs lotta help
work on personals, punches n work on ya structa n u b iight
6/10
Mike Mcguire
I'll rip through ya ribs and ''hand-cuff'' your heart and call it cardiac ''arrest''
Messin with the wrong man, Mike McGuire, is just like the fan and Ron Artest
Attack is my code of arms, like you ''deepthroatin'' my rhymes is your destructive bomb
This ''pussy'' is gettin ripped and leakin of blood, so give this bitch a larger ''tampon''-(DAMN!!!!!!)
You got a somewhat dirty mouth only cuz you spit jack shit
Unlike you, I spit dirty lyrics from my mouth like I got gingivitis
I came and burned you like 3rd degree, and melted your spine
How can he be called Infinate when you don't got one punchline
ay yo u came hard on dis 1 ya punches n personals hit da spot n u left dat nigga n da dust. U 2 need ta improve ya structure but eething else wuz str8.
Fav Line:Attack is my code of arms, like you ''deepthroatin'' my rhymes is your destructive bomb
This ''pussy'' is gettin ripped and leakin of blood, so give this bitch a larger ''tampon''
DAT LINE RITE DERE DID IT 4 U NICE SHIT
8/10
my v/ Mike Mcguire fa betta verse
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