Voted For: vagita4
PsyChoBabbLe
for Rap's Sake...Ya Fillers Are Like Boobs..They Ben Fake...
Real Thug? Only Burners He Carries r 1'z i use 2 Copy My Mix Tape
^Ok opener, weak punch still 3/10^
Dat was jus a warm-up, time 2 show dis kid how i spit so well
Vagita huh? i'll Clip his Tale like unsportmen-like conduct in da NFL
^Weak punch, no creativity 0/10^
Caught dat punk..get Buu'd slicin u apart..so why bother wit chunks
Wear Out ur genes like fashions. when i son da father of Trunks
^UMM weak closer had no flow no punch 0/10^
OVERALL:Ur verse did not flow well, ur lines was sorta stretched and u had no effective punches in ur verse, i felt ur personals were not effective and ur verse was basic with nnothing to attack ur opponent with.
Criminal
u always missin the point, like shaq shootin free-throws
droping shit on a thread, we label it “free-posts”
^Show a link to were he freeposted, or its a fake personal 0/10^
fuck rambuling ya name, u gambuling ya fame
N like that drug cermerical bullets i'll scramble-ya-brain
^Thats like self glor. But good punch at that 5/10^
LOOK,
we aint the same N u cant stop-me-infact
the rocky of RAP, that'll spit N still give ya STOCK'IN-A-CAP... BANG!!!!
^pretty good wordplay good ending and punch 6/10^
OVERALL:Ur verse was enjoyable to read simply for its good flow and somewhat good personals and punches....Ur structure was quite off but i was still able to catch a good flow and connecct the dots to all of ur strong points in ur verse...And thats why ur verse takes the batttle
V/CRIMINAL
rtf on my sig links, in 3 days or this vote will be removed....have a nice day
