Voted For: Reach.

REACH.

I peep'd ur past, and son....your ass
Your lines are longer than paragraphs
^Short, got right to the point nice punch 4/10^
Wit the dash'-An'SlaSH! shit, save the space
Your just an example that Trojans break...
^good personal, nice multis 7/10^
A straight mistake a mis hap a broken criminal,
The only conviction u hold is bein invisible
^weak punch/personal, wasnt fealin it 0/10^
I break your spine an coccix, switch cords an spit,
Just to give a legitamite reason for u to spit shit
^this is good wordplay, good punch 7/10^
This Convict's Cut, Shower time...Your Fucked
This Boy's got less delivery than a Pizza Hut
^Good closer, way to end it....nice job 8/10^
Overall:This verse was small, yet got right to the point the flow was good, ur inserted good multis and great punches and personals way to attack your opponent.

Criminal

The Best Regarded, Aggressive, Times up!, so Set ya Guard Up
Ya ‘words above mine’?, NEVER, unless I Replied to a Thread YOU STARTED!
^Forced the rhyme, weak opener 3/10^
When I spit and say “there ain’t a whole lot to it”, It’s cuz it was an EASE-to-Bust…
But when YOU spit and I say “see there ain’t a whole lot to it” it’s cuz it was WEAK-as-FUCK!!!
^kinda bad flow, punch was weak as fuck...0/10^
In stead of “markin his set backs” he carves “Progress-in-his-Memory”
So I “Squash the beef” and “heat it when it’s In my grill” like Hamburger’s “Process-and-Delivery”
^No punch inserted, felt u coulda done better 0/10^
Yall “cop out” like “police shift endings” when they Leavin-for-their-Own-Homes
Claimin ya ain’t “seen nuthin worth replyin to”…that’s cuz you still Readin-all-ya-Own-Flows
^Pretty decent punch, liked the way it flowed..5/10^
Doesn’t matter HOW NICE you are cuz I CRUSH-Vet’s-Perfect-Spits…
Because it’s “easy to clown you” like “One-Step-Circus-Kits”!!
^Nice closer, good wordplay at that...prob. best line...6/10^
OVERALL:I felt your lines were poorly structured, u offered a bad flow....ur punches were decent but nothing quite that hard hitting, as for ur personals i think u also lacked those...ur multis where absent.

v/reach.

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