Voted For: Affliction

Structure-Both had poor structure........couldnt create a flow on either, this is a problem simply becuz then the punches arent as effective in the readers mind.

Vocab-Gutta give this one to criminal, he had the only real vocab in his verse mina puse......lol both enhance ur vocab so its presented well in ur verse next time

Multis-Niether had any multis so i simply cant vote on this catergorie................

Personals-Affliction had the more afflicting persnoals lol....criminal had some personals but afliction took it away, this catergorie-afflfiction

Punches-Plain to see who hAd the harder hitting punches, Criminals punches were harder hitting and far more creative, this is consistant for him.......this catergorie-criminal

Originality-Affliction had the more fresh verse...stood out more, his verse caught my eye and was presented better than criminals.....

v/affliction

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