its wierd hearin someones try on a beat that has already been worked wit sepcially when that other person is a lot more experienced but your flow was pretty good, i didnt like how you layered stuff kinda, lyrics were pretty good they could been a lil better, quality was pretty good as well and i thought you could toned your voice better, its like you tried to sound to hard kinda you just lay back and let it flow wit emotion ya know.

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