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Old 09-05-05, 08:01 PM   #17
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

you woned that nigga

ok NOW:you got owned and your suck, no offense but stick to audio becuase you had no real good hard hitting any things you suffering form writers block? any who you need to practice writing lines and start getting better no hate but damn you need to elavte again

LRYC:your rap name sucks which made me think you where gonna get owned but you came out pretty good your rhyme scheme was good and it flowed real good you also had some good punches and shit like that you just nee dto work on some metaphores and similies and other than that you owned him

vote=lyric

RTF PLEASE
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207228
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