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Old 09-06-05, 09:36 AM   #6
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hmmm mite as well see if any progression has been made here... i like this beat, its tite... 20 up first, flow is aight, punches are still on sum played shyt tho maan. just bein hones... push keys was prolly tha closest to original tho... that spit sick like rabies do line again.... still reusin lines... chorus is aight, hotdog line is lame tho... aight now debit comes in. soundin alot different on this one, damn yo honestly i like this verse too many gun lines but honestly ya style is sumn i can feel now, flow is on point ferreal.. im thinkin tha lyrics are bland, but ya style has def improved. debit shinin on this one f'sho. good job on tha vast improvement. keep it runnin
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