Voted For: pictureperfect2

Mr. Lyricist
You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side.
^self glor, no damaging punch 0/10^
You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame.
Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name.
^Iight word play, semi diss 4/10^
Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery .
So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury.
^sorta forced the rhyme, good wordplay 5/10^
OVERALL:Your verse was good structured, i was able to catch a good flow, only flawws were ur personals and punches i dont feel that they were hard enough.....and you had some self glor, talking about urself....save that for the cyphers

PicturePerfect2

this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
^Good punch and set up for the diss 6/10^
avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car
^Once again good set up for the punch, hit hard 7/10^
if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose
cuz i read his verse............
.............and saw he doesn't put brains to use
^pretty decent closer, 5/10^
OVERALL:u stayed consistant with your punches....they were effective to ur opponent....ur flow was off but u made up wit ur outstanding punches......you take this for better punches..

v/pictureperfect2

RTF on my new text battle.....thanks man

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