Thread: Death vs Batman
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Old 09-06-05, 11:56 AM   #6
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Voted For: Batman

yo maybe this muhfuckas death will be by a bat bite
u say im the whackest and u were almost right
7/10...good opener

cuz tha only one wacker than me is ur bitch ass
ur rymes are to simple ill shatter you like glass
8/10...good punch

i hear that u might be the next big thing,but imma clean ur clock
tha next biggest thing that u see will in ur mouth and itll be my cock
6/10...not feeling dis sounds gaii

yo this muhfuckers 20 and he wants to battle sumone 7 years yunger
ill quench ur thirst with cum and use my dick to end your hunger
6/10....sounds gay agen but its a good punch

you said that in an hour u could write 1000 linez
but im tha one who could cuz im a lyrical mastermind
8/10 good closer....good punch




Ill burn BATMAN of his wins... call this a ROBIN
its like murdering cows.. the way i got this BEEF STOPIN
9/10 good opener....good punch

this dude BLOWS on the mic, he must think its COCK
my guns to this fag like a MOVIE.. Im seeing CLIPS n DROPS
......6/10......didnt feel dis line..

151 posts, and im still more of a vet
ill send bullets like AIR... so they STORE IN YA CHEST
5/10.......no punches

my raps will RING IN YA SLEEP... so CALL THIS A DREAM
its like you wearin HOT PANTS.. cause i make u SCOULD AT THE SEAMS
5/10......didnt feel dis da much

ten lines is enough to murk this jerk.. ive left him hurt
ill leave this WORM dead.. its about time he SLEPT IN DIRT
8/10 good closer nice punch

ma vote goes to batman for he had better punches n flow structure....

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