Thread: Death vs Batman
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Old 09-06-05, 01:33 PM   #13
Dickard.
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Voted For: Batman

BATMAN
yo maybe this muhfuckas death will be by a bat bite
u say im the whackest and u were almost right
^good reference to my battle, but u didnt throw a punch0/10^
cuz tha only one wacker than me is ur bitch ass
ur rymes are to simple ill shatter you like glass
^ok punch, got right to the point 4/10^
i hear that u might be the next big thing,but imma clean ur clock
tha next biggest thing that u see will in ur mouth and itll be my cock
^lol i like this line, made me laugh good punch 6/10^
yo this muhfuckers 20 and he wants to battle sumone 7 years yunger
ill quench ur thirst with cum and use my dick to end your hunger
^good use of words...lol weirdo but still good punch 7/10^
you said that in an hour u could write 1000 linez
but im tha one who could cuz im a lyrical mastermind
^show proof he siad that or its a fake punch 4/10^
OVERALL:ur verse was filled with semi punches that hit at the medium level...u attempted to add a personal but it could be fake unless u show a link.......overall prob. ur best battle....good job

DEATH
Ill burn BATMAN of his wins... call this a ROBIN
its like murdering cows.. the way i got this BEEF STOPIN
^good wordplay, yet weak diss 3/10
this dude BLOWS on the mic, he must think its COCK
my guns to this fag like a MOVIE.. Im seeing CLIPS n DROPS
^ehh not feelin thil line not very hard punch 3/10^
151 posts, and im still more of a vet
ill send bullets like AIR... so they STORE IN YA CHEST
^niether are vets, and that line is played 0/10^
my raps will RING IN YA SLEEP... so CALL THIS A DREAM
its like you wearin HOT PANTS.. cause i make u SCOULD AT THE SEAMS
^ehh, not a hard punch had no meaning...0/10^
ten lines is enough to murk this jerk.. ive left him hurt
ill leave this WORM dead.. its about time he SLEPT IN DIRT
^ok multis but basic punch weak and played 1/10^
OVERALL:I wasnt feelin this verse, i felt that u came weak and that some of ur punchess were played andmeaningless...just my opinion

v/batman

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