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Old 09-06-05, 01:46 PM   #8
Dickard.
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Voted For: Batman

ThA NoToRiOuS D
I Get them stacked, accept the fact
There is no way you could beat me....the skillz is what you lack
You see me, protect ya back
^Whack, and played i used it in the 5th grade 0/10^
Nigga, you cant come near me
Im like fire, err' body fears me
im like ludacris...im coming for the numba 1 spot...ya hear me
^Nope, whack and played.......nothing but self glor. 0/10^
Yo this is no joke...ma burner will leave you unwoke
Mad smoke in this hood....it'll make you choke
^self glor...no punch 0/10^
Where I'm from son, snitches like you be dialing 911
But those the one you find in the alley filled wit 9 dum-dums
^umm best effort to through a punch 1/10^
OVERALL:ur verse was filled with whack multis, whack lines everything was self glor, u had no punches or personals thrown towards ur opponent.......

BatMan

yo i read some of ur battles and all your doin is throwin jabs
but tha punches im throwin hit harder than concrete slabs
^Self glor. But good reference and creativity 4/10^
you need to elevate mayne u aint nuthin yet
im a noob but up against u i feel like a vet
^decent punch, could be better but still a punch 5/10^
i figure that 6 linez is all it should take to bury you 6 feet deep
im too good to battle u in person so drop ur verse when u hear tha beep
^lol kinda funny made me laugh 6/10^
yo i stopped for a minute and now im back and comin at u head on
im better than that bitch that calls him the brooklyn don
^no worst line, not feelin taht 0/10^
OVERALL:ur verse was far better than ur opponent u had good punches, good referneces...overall just better than ur opponent

v/batman

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