A Life Of Chryme
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Your structure...was quite off, flow was still created, vocab was off the hook, ur multis were iffy...wasnt feelin them....ur emotion was tight...felt you had extremely good imagery....keep this shit up man.......just fix up ya structure ull be cool 7.5/10....rtf on a battle or summin
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