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Old 09-06-05, 06:44 PM   #15
Deranged
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Voted For: JwillP

yo, you couldnt sign in, cuz your wack rhymin failed your connection,
i bring rhymes to the table, completely stable, that are close to perfection,
4...good flow n all...but you ain't dissin well..self glorifing here too
listen up closely man, you jus messin, im teachin you lyrical lessons,
you obviously need help, you can tell, cuz im takin you out in this lyrical session, without any questions
3....no punch....seems u focusin on flow to much
yo man, im gettin you lyrically vexed, peeps cant wait for whats next,
cuz i thrill them like the movie "Triple X"
3...u talkin bout urself too much as opposed to dissing the oppenent
once i've finished writin this, your flows just gonna be historical, your diabolical
yo, you think you beat me? dont answer, look up the meaning of rhetorical!
2...u called him diabolical?..wtf...and weak

Bond, thats laughable like naming yourself mr. ill...
I see now, its because your writtens have 0.07% skill...
4....weak punch
I'm a vet, this alias was just created for laughs...
Cause your writtens are like obease nudist colonies takin group baths...
5....decent
You won't get what you want, that love and affection..
Because from this site all you'll find is a back door, called REJECTION
5...basic..but at least u trew punches

OK...Jwillp got this

One mic..you didn't diss in that verse.Ur flow was good...and I mean..real good.But the content was shit.I ain't see one good this here.Maybe the interals were forced?..I dunno...but you didn't have a punch.Just simple self glorifing.

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