£ivin a £yfe of Çrhyme
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Voted For: Peace Back
Im not gonna take time to break it down bar for bar but heres my feedback to both
PeaceBack-I liked how you kinda had a theme to your drop and you stayed constant with it....nice vocabulary....good punches, a pretty nice drop keep it up
AITZ-First off, don't use those //'s please you make the whole site look retarded....the best thing you had goin for you was "u talk about gays more then u drop punch's//
i bet ur known to lay, and take the cock in lunch's//" besides that your shit was real basic and wack ass punches, you need to elevate big time man
Vote-Peace Back for comin much harder with better structure, vocab, and punches
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