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Voted For: Tekneek
yea, this battle is good...you both came decent.
youkay-
your opener is funny and cretively written, some strong punches in there too, some good lines, The "pigment" line wordplay was good.. and "c" bar, ok punch. lol @the ventriloquist line,was funny. ok punches towards the end, you had some creative lines here.
c.ghost-
i wasnt crazy about your structure in this verse,it seemed rushed,jumbled. you had some ok lines,but i feel your opponent came stronger witht he wordplay and multies, also you seemed to lack any real punches that would be conclusive. overall decent battle both,but i have to give it to youkay for the more creative verse.1.rtf.
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