Uhh.... Ok so I decided to check out some of what RV is bringing these days..

I def aint feeling the slow flow... Sorry guys, this sounds like an amature version of g-unit but way more over the top trynna be hard gangsta shit.. Loosen up on the real, first guys voice sounds like hes trynna squeese a log out...

Yous need to lose the whole slow squarish flow... It just sounds way too over the top and un-natural and the lyrics could not be any more generic I swear, if I had a doller for every rapper that I've heard spit gat lines like that..... I would be able to retire at age 19..

I dont wanna get dudes all defencive n shit, but you might wanna try and make stuff that sounds less like almost every single other netcee in existance..

I get the feeling I should of prolly left this one alone... But I think yous could do a lot better than this and I think that people are being way too sugar coated with their feedback..