Ahh... Just as I thought rv audio had no chance of putting out something decent..

Only problem you have is that your using the wrong mic.. It sounds like your rapping through a phone on some X-raided shit... But thats fixable..

This track has a nice sound that I can chill to.. Still could use a bit of work on the flow and hooks would sound a lot better if they had a singer on em.. But other than that, your stuff is kinda promising from what I can tell from this track.

Keep at it.